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Favorite Books from 2012

Need a good book to read? Well we have our top picks from 2012 to share! Have a good book you read in 2012? Share it in the comments below!

Here’s my top 10 books out of everything I read in 2012 (you can see all the books I read in 2012 here). It was hard to narrow it down, but I highly recommend all of these books.

The Tiffany Aching/Wee Free Men series by Terry Pratchett… okay, really any Terry Pratchett book
The Girl of Fire and Thorns by Rae Carson
Insignia by S.J. Kincaid
Trickster’s Choice/Trickster’s Queen by Tamora Pierce
Monument 14 by Emmy Laybourne (mature themes)
The Selection by Kiera Kass
Partials and The Hollow City by Dan Wells
Princess Academy by Shannon Hale
The Savage Grace (The Dark Divine series) by Bree Despain
Ready Player One by Ernest Cline (some language)

(Also, I read EVERNEATH by Brodi Ashton as an ARC in 2011, but it came out in 2012 so I want to strongly recommend that one. It made my to 10 list of all time.)

The Shadow Children series by Margaret Peterson Haddix
The Future of Us by Jay Asher and Carolyn Mackler
The Boy Who Dared by Susan Campbell Bartoletti
The Compound by S. A. Boden
Crazy Beautiful by Lauren Baratz-Logsted
Deadline by Chris Crutcher
Catalyst by Laurie Halse Anderson
Breaking Point (and pretty much everything else) by Alex Flinn
Wintergirls by Laurie Halse Anderson
Peeled by Joan Bauer

I’m changing it up a bit and talking about 2013. My favorite books of 2013 (I’m guessing since I haven’t read them yet, but I’m really anticipating these ones):

In Memory of Light
3rd Beyonders book
2nd Stormlight book (if it comes out this year!)
3rd Lost Fleet: Beyond the frontier book

So in making a list of my top 10 books I’ve read this year, I discovered that I only read about 15 in 2012. Sad, I know. But at least they were pretty good ones.

1. Code Name Verity by Elizabeth Wein
2. Shadow and Bone by Leigh Bardugo
3. Divergent by Veronica Roth
4. The False Prince by Jennifer A. Nielsen
5. These is My Words by Nancy E. Turner
6. Every Day by David Levithan
7. Liar & Spy by Rebecca Stead
8. Princess Ben by Catherine Gilbert Murdock
9. Hope Was Here by Joan Bauer
10. Everneath by Brodi Ashton

Icefall by Matthew Kirby
The Princess books by Mette Ivie Harrison
The Riyria Revelations series by Michael J. Sullivan
Any book by the Critique Group!

As far as books go, I didn’t read a ton outstide of schoolwork. Shannon Hale’s Palace of Stone was fun, and Peter Turchi’s Maps of the Imagination is an interesting book about writing.

Code Name Verity by Elizabeth Wein
The Alloy of Law by Brandon Sanderson
Shadow and Bone by Leigh Bardugo
The Name of the Wind by Patrick Rothfuss
Origin by Jessica Khoury
The Hollow City by Dan Wells
Partials by Dan Wells
Book of a Thousand Days by Shannon Hale
White Cat by Holly Black
Ship Breaker by Paolo Bacigalupi

What were your favorite reads in 2012? We’d love to get your recommendations, so leave them in a comment below!

The Oh-So-Important Teen BFF

This morning, I took my kids to this place called Monkey Joe’s, where they have about six of those huge, blow-up slides/bouncer toys that you’ll see at parties or town festivals. My 3-year-old is little miss gregarious, so she instantly became best friends with two of the little girls that were there.

It just got me thinking about friendships in our novels. I write young adult, and it seems like the focus for YA is always a romantic relationship, not a friend relationship. Last year, one of the best books I read was CODE NAME VERITY by Elizabeth Wein (my review is here), and the dominant relationship was between best friends. I loved it. It was so refreshing to read. Not that I don’t like romance, because I totally do. But best friends really do mean so much to teens. Best friends and boys. That’s the teen girl experience. So why don’t we see more besties in books? (Or am I just reading the wrong books?)

Here’s a few ways I thought of that you can strengthen friend relationships (even secondary ones) in your novels:

1. Give them a past. 
This is for characters that are already friends at the start of your novel. And even if your characters’ past doesn’t matter much for your story, you need to know it and they need to have it, because it’ll give the relationship more depth. How did they meet? What are their inside jokes? What hard times have they been through? Once you know the answers, you can add in little things like, maybe Jane keeps a stash of Aleve and chocolate in her locker because of that one time in eighth grade when Lucy broke a boy’s nose when she was PMSing.

2. Give them a compelling reason to be friends
If your characters are just meeting, they need to have a real reason to be friends. Maybe it starts out that they are both thrown into a situation and have to work with each other, but if they are going to be real friends (trusting each other with deep dark secrets or something), there needs to be a reason. In HARRY POTTER, Hermione starts out as an annoying know-it-all. Because Ron and Harry are nice boys, they go to save her when the troll attacks her in the girls’ bathroom, but the incident that seals their friendship is afterwards. The boys are about to get in trouble for seeking out the troll, but Hermione lies to the professors and puts the blame on herself.

3. Give them a test
Using HARRY POTTER as the example again, do you remember book 5? Harry was a total brat the whole book, but somehow he still had his friends in the end. Every friendship will be tested, and giving your friends a fight or hard times can really up the tension in your story and also add dimension to their friendship dynamic.

Some other helpful questions that might get your ideas flowing:

How did they meet?
What are their inside jokes?
What made them become friends?
Why are they still friends?
If they didn’t see each other for a year and then got back together, would they still have something to talk about? (It can be okay if the answer is no, just as long as they have a past and a current connection.)

Any other questions to ask yourself or good tips on creating a great friend relationship? I always love suggestions!

Photo by Mateusz Stachowski

We Make Time for Things We Want

I first started to realize this truth when I was single. Yes, single. Yes, I speak of….

Dating.

Dun dun dun!

Dating can be really fun. But lets be honest, it can be a total drag too. But there was something I realized. If someone was too busy to go out on dates with me, it wasn’t because they were too busy, it was because they weren’t interested enough to make the time.

I challenge any girl to say I’m wrong! I don’t think I am.

I must add a caveat to this. There are some people who truly are too busy for things they’d like to do because of thing they have to do. Like a single mom who works 2 jobs who would truly like to be there more for her kids but can’t because of necessity.

However, most of us can make time for things.

Like writing! I don’t write nearly as much as I’d like. But it’s because I usually decide that there is something I’d like to do more. Like play a video game. Watch YouTube. Hang out with my wife.

I challenge any author (including myself) to make more time to write. You can do it. There is more time in your day you can devote. You may have to give up something else.

As for me and myself, YouTube won’t miss me!

Help me name my book

Okay, so I need help coming up with a name for my book, which is why I’m hosting a contest, and the winner whose title I choose will get a $25 gift card to Barnes and Noble.

Here’s the query pitch, so you have an idea. It’s a YA science fiction.

For most of her life, 16-year-old Mykelle Lockland trained to be a covert operative under her father’s direction. But after her father’s assassination, she realizes she’s a secret weapon without a purpose.

An underground organization “elects” Mykelle as a survivor of the impending war over Earth’s depleted resources between the upper and lower classes—a war where disease and natural disasters are used as the weapons. Mykelle is assigned missions to help stop the war, using both her training and computer hacking skills. But as Mykelle discovers secrets beyond her missions, she is faced with the ultimate challenge to find out if her skills are enough to save both her sister—and the world outside.

The book is a cross between Robert Ludlum’s Bourne books and Orson Scott Card’s Ender’s Game series, and weaves Emily Dickinson poems throughout the narrative.

I’m looking for something along the lines of “Total Recall” or “Girl of Fire and Thorns” where the title fits all aspects of the book. Feel free to suggest as many titles as you want. If there are duplicates/overlaps, the person with the first time stamp on their comment gets the prize. Also, if I don’t like any of the titles suggested, then I won’t pick a winner.

This contest is open until I pick a winner – and I will be emailing you to let you know. So keep churning out the ideas!

The Next Big Thing Blog Hop

So this blog hop has been going on for months and months and it’s our turned to be tagged. Adrianne James answered her questions last week (you can see the post here) and then tagged us! Joel Smith jumped at the chance to answer the questions.

What is the working title of your book?
Corridors of Ice

Who or what inspired you to write this book?
I have great respect for families who have loved ones serving in the military. I also have a fascination with the idea of a modern military running into enemies in a fantasy based world. I first had the idea of a convoy passing through to another world, and how they’d deal with it, etc.

What genre does your book fall under?
YA Speculative Fiction -  perhaps you could call it a military fantasy :-)

What is a one sentence synopsis of your book?
Sixteen-year-old Jason discovers his marine dad and his brigade are stranded on another world and it is up to him to mount a rescue, and save that other world in the process.

Which actors would you choose to play your characters in a movie rendition?
First, I really have no idea. Since it would be a long time before a movie could possibly be in the works, I don’t think the following choices would work if/when it would be a possibility :-)

Jason: Logan Lerman

Skye (the love interest): Amanda Seyfried

For the type of character Skye is, I think Amanda would fit the part.

Will your book be self-published or agented?
Agented – I believe a good agent and editor will take any writing to the next level.

How long did it take for you to write your first draft?
The first draft didn’t reach the end before I needed to revamp and rewrite, so I’d say about a year for the first complete draft.

What else about your book might pique the readers’ interest?
Jason thinks he’s a normal kid until he feels ice inside his chest during a humid heat-wave. He learns that his mother was not from Earth, but a world called Argaia, and his dad has rejoined the Marines in an attempt to find a way back there. Abrams tanks and Bradley fighting vehicles attempt to break a siege of a walled city, and Jason discovers he is a heir of the royal family of the city his dad is trying to save, but instead of a magical sword, he ends up with a magical rifle.

You should click the link below in one week’s time to see the post from

Chersti Nieveen

Okay, yes, we’re somewhat tagging ourselves here, but you know you want to find out more! Besides, can you imagine the arguments over who got to answer this post?

Writing Goals 2013

WRITING GOALS FOR 2013 from Writer Therapy

Okay, so I’m going to demand a lot of myself this year. FIRST THING, I need to finish my final revision to get my current WIP to my agent so we can go on submission (*cheer*) sometime in 2013.

I have two new story ideas I’ve started, and I really want to finish a draft of The Eternity Contract (ya light scifi) and revise. And then I want to finish a draft of Star Quality (also ya light scifi… guess that lets you know what I generally write…)

I also want to attend 2 writing conferences, read at least 75 books, and write at least 1,000 words / day. And yeah, this has NOTHING to do with writing (except it gets my creative juices going), but I’m making it my goal to watch the new Doctor Who episodes.

Plus… season 2 of Writer Therapy anyone??

I plan on finishing my final revision of Joshua Fallen and the Matter of Darkness (MG scifi) so I can query it. I also want to start a first draft of the second book! (or a draft of a separate story). And I really want to read more, so I want a goal to read 50 books

This year’s goals are simple: Query to find an agent for Corridors of Ice (YA scifi) and finish my final revision of Time Breaker (adult scifi).

Wait…I’m a writer???

Lol.
My goals….Umm, write? Like anything at all.
Sigh. OK, serious now…
I want to write or revise at least 250 words a day, six days a week. That seems like such a lame low number, but it’s all I got for now. I also want to do a revisions MarchWriMo, because really…November? Most inconvenient WriMo ever. Though I am sad I’m missing JaNoWriMo, but I’ll be cheering y’all on!

Okay. Goals. Here we go. Finish thesis, defend thesis, revise thesis, query thesis. Start new novel. In that order.

Um……….. my brain isn’t currently equipped with goal-making mode. :) But I plan to write a new book. Which is vague, but it’s all I got.

Finish first draft of Bianca Bunter. Finish rewrites on Elizabeth and start querying. Oh, and read 100 books…but I reserve the right for at least half of them to be picture books, since I’ll have a newborn. :)

 WRITING GOALS FOR 2013 from y’all

So what are your writing goals for 2013? Leave them in the comments below – we’d LOVE to hear what you’re working on, or where you see yourself in 2014.

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Reading Science Fiction Challenge

HELP!?!

I need book recommendations.

I tend to write science fiction and suddenly I realized… I haven’t read much science fiction. At least, not the classics. (I’ve read most of the current YA scifi books, as well as things like A Wrinkle in Time, Ender’s Game, The Uglies series, ect. ) I’ve usually avoided the classic scifi books because I’m notinto the hard scifi stuff, and some of it can be totally weird. But I’ve realized I need to educate myself on my genre. So I’ve been putting together a list of books I absolutely must read as a scifi writer, and I need your help in making sure it is complete.So I’m looking for great scifi recommendations. What have you got for me? (Post in the comments – and I’ll take great fantasy recs as well!) Who else wants to join me in this SciFi Challenge?

ANNNNNDDDD, I hit my reading goal for this year of 60 books. Right now, I’m at 63/60, so I’m going to raise my goal to 75 books for next year. What about you? How many books have you read, or do you plan on reading next year?

(You can find me on goodreads HERE - to see what scifi I’ve read, or what books I finished this year and recommend. I always give 5 stars to books I love.)

CHERSTI’S SCIFI CHALLENGE BOOK LIST FOR 2013
Dune
Atlas Shrugged
Brave New World
Do Androids Dream of Electric Sheep (Blade Runner) – Philip K Dick
Glory Road – Robert A Heinlein
The Prydain Chronicles – Lloyd Alexander
The Riddlemaster of Hed serie s-Patricia A McKillip.
The Elijah Bailey books – Isaac Asimov
Martians come in Clouds, Roog, Beyond the Door, We Can Remember It for You Wholesale – short stories by Philip K Dick
Call Me Joe – Poul Anderson short story
Jeffty is Five and The Disposessed – Harlan Ellison short stories
Robert Heinlein’s “Juvenile” SF novels.
Drawing of the Dark – Tim Powers
Balumina Trilogy – James P Blaylock’s
The Fellowship for Alien Detection
The Forever War
I, Robot
Clockwork Orange
Neuromancer
Speaker for the Dead
Starship Troopers/Stranger in a Strange Land
Gardens of the Moon
The Way of Shadows (Night Angel Trilogy)
Moon Called
The Lost Years of Merlin
The princess and the Goblin
he Knife of Never Letting Go – Patrick Ness
Lilith’s Brood – Octavia Butler
The Sword of Shannara

Books I’ve Now Read Since My SCI-FI CHALLENGE
2001: A Space Odyssey
Interstellar Pig
Ready Player One (fantastic!)

Writing To Live versus Living to Write

John le Carre famously said, “A desk is a dangerous place from which to view the world.”

Yet, it’s fair to say we writers spend a significant percentage of our time doing just that. We get into our grooves and our routines. We brew the same coffee or tea, work from the same room from the same laptop, perhaps occasionally broken up by critique group meetings or marathon café-writing sessions.

That is why travel is my favorite form of writer therapy.

In order to write, we must first live. And by live, I mean not on autopilot, wandering relentlessly through our routines, but to live in full presence and awareness of the world and our place within it.

Travel, especially to a foreign country, helps us do just that by jolting us out of the ordinary and assaulting all of our senses. We can’t take anything for granted, which is both exhilarating and frightening. Because we’re responding to a physical environment completely different from our own, our emotional reactions are heightened too.

That’s what we like to call drama. Fodder for great storytelling.

Then there’s the fact that a person returning home from a major trip is rarely the same one who left. Travel changes us. All good stories start at the point of change, so traveling helps us become the protagonists of our own lives. By putting ourselves through the paces of change, it helps us do the same to our characters when we’re writing.

Think of some of the major narrative structures in literature – the voyage and return, the quest, the rebirth – these stories often involve physical travel, but it’s the inward journey, mirroring the outward experience, that is so compelling. No wonder these major structures mimic the experience of travel!

So the next time you feel stuck with your writing, put it down and go somewhere – anywhere — that’s unfamiliar. Whether it’s for a few hours to the next town over a for days or weeks in a foreign land, you’ll emerge with fresh perspective and a renewed sense of being part of the world you’re trying to bring to life with your writing.

That is the difference between writing to live and living to write.

Buon Viaggio!

Julie Hedlund is a Children’s Book author and Freelance Writer. Julie’s debut book, A TROOP IS A GROUP OF MONKEYS, will be released as an interactive storybook app for the iPad in December 2012 by Little Bahalia Publishing. Julie is the founder and host of the 12 x 12 in 2012 picture book writing challenge, a monthly contributor on Katie Davis’ Brain Burps About Books podcast, and the creator of Julie Hedlund’s Template for Storybook App Proposals.  Julie is so passionate about the need for writers to travel she is leading the first annual Writer’s Renaissance retreat in Florence, Italy in 2013. If you are a Writer Therapy reader and you sign up for Writer’s Renaissance, make sure you mention WT in the “Where did you hear about Writer’s Renaissance?” box and you’ll get $50 off your registration (discount taken on final payment).

Guest Post: The Do’s and Don’ts of Publishing

5 Things You Can’t Control

1. Publishing is a business.
Writing is a personal expression. Book buying is an emotional choice. But publishing is a business. And publishers are in the business of making money. If they don’t think your manuscript will make them money, it will be a much harder sell.

2. The number of manuscripts submitted in a given year.
A publishing house can publish only so many manuscripts a year and still make a profit. That number may vary from year to year depending on how the previous year went.

3. The number of available slots a publisher has for new writers.
New writers are the lifeblood of a thriving publishing house. We need new stories and new perspectives and new ideas. But we also need to make money, and established authors are less of a financial risk than a new author is. The number of available slots for a new author may be small, but those slots are out there.

4. Other submitted manuscripts that are similar to yours.
Trends are tricky to predict and even trickier to manage. What happens when a publisher receives multiple manuscripts that are similar in style or audience—they pick the best one and send the others back. That may not mean that those rejected manuscripts are bad; they just weren’t the best one of the bunch for that particular publisher. Don’t write for a trend; write the best book you possibly can. That is what will catch a publisher’s eye.

5. An editor’s or agent’s mood.
Even the best editors have bad days and, as harsh as it sounds, sometimes when you are having a bad day, you make bad decisions. And sometimes you say no to a manuscript you might have said yes to on another day.

5 Things You Can Control

1. Do your homework.
Research your genre. What else is being published? How much? Which books are like yours in style or audience? What are people buying? Answering these “big picture” kinds of questions will help you make sure you submit your work to the right agent or the right publisher at the right time.

2. Follow posted submission guidelines.
Guidelines are there for a reason. Read them. Love them. Follow them. Guidelines can vary from publisher to publisher, from agent to agent, so make sure you personalize your submission as appropriate. It will only take you a minute or two, but that could be the difference between making a good first impression and not making an impression at all.

3. Write a killer cover letter.
The cover letter is one of the first things an agent or an editor will see of your work. Make sure you have a good hook, that you clearly explain what your story is about, and that you highlight how awesome you are. We want to like your book—and a good cover letter often gives us permission to do so.

4. Showcase your talent.
Your manuscript doesn’t have to be perfect before you submit it, but it does have to be the best you can possibly make it. Write, rewrite, review, rewrite it again. Do whatever you have to in order to make sure you are showcasing your strengths of your story.

5. Deal with a rejection letter.
Rejection happens. A lot. But it doesn’t have to be the end of your career. If Publisher A says no, that doesn’t mean Publisher B will too. If Agent A passes on your idea, scout around until you find an agent who will say yes. Persistence pays off; I promise.

Keep writing!

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Lisa Mangum is an editor at Shadow Mountain, and the author of the award-winning Hourglass Door trilogy and After Hello. Besides books, Lisa loves movies, sunsets, spending time with her family, trips to Disneyland, and vanilla ice cream topped with fresh raspberries. She lives in Taylorsville with her husband, Tracy.

 

 

Skunk Girl

Back in July, my house smelled like Calvin Klein Euphoria. You’d think “Mmm, yummy man smell,” but no. Small doses = yum. All over your house = headache. On our flight home from vacation, my husband’s aftershave spilled all over our checked bag. I washed all the clothes, but there was still the how-the-heck-am-I-going-to-wash-this? stuff cooped up behind a closed bathroom door.

It got me thinking about other smells in my life. When I was in middle school, Ilived in in middle-of-nowhere Texas. Almost the whole underside of our house was open for any old critter to crawl under there, and we got skunks…twice.

Have you ever smelled that skunk smell while driving down a highway? You’re so glad when it finally passes and you can breathe fresh air again. Ok. Now imagine that in your house. For days.

I went to a school that had outdoor hallways, so our lockers were inside the classrooms. Since carrying a backpack was SO uncool, I usually left it in the classroom near my locker. But on the skunk day, when I got to my afternoon science class in that very same room, the entire room smelled like skunk.

Someone decided to investigate, discovered my backpack, and announced–with a disgusted look on her face–that the smell was coming from my bag. I was thirteen. Death seemed a better alternative to ever coming back to that school again.

Our sense of smell is often forgotten when we’re writing, but it can have a huge impact. Whether it be stinky or oh-my-heavens-yum, including all of our senses can make our writing come alive and put our readers into our setting.

Any smellorific stories from your lives? Or good ones from books?

Where do your ideas come from?

All ideas come from somewhere. Whether it be connections between things we know, or hearing something that sparks something else, our ideas for our stories stem from other things. I would say it is very rare to just have a spontaneous idea just present itself into one’s mind without some sort of input.

My WIP comes from a lot of things I’ve learned. First was reading books about the universe and coming to realize just how large it actually is. I mean, our solar system is huge! And the Milky Way… immense! And the Milky Way is just a small drop in the bucket of the Universe.

Next is dark matter. It’s something scientists know is there because of it’s effect on the things we can see, but have no idea what it is. That alone could spawn hundred and thousands of ideas! Well, it spawned the idea of my present book.

Where do your ideas come from?

It is a sad story you hear on the news? A technology article? A collection of books you read where if you take this part and this part and this part and combine them… a whole new story! Do they come from a hike in the woods? A camp out where clouds roll in and envelope the land in complete and utter darkness? And only the campfire is seen?

Ideas can come from anywhere!

Share where some of your ideas come from by commenting below. :)